if it could be
that i could drink up pain
i'd do so from you
with a thirst never before
to never let you face fall
t
t
if it could be
that i could grow wings
i'd fly to you
to kiss your cheek
and bring that dimples to show again
t
t
if it could be that
i could be strong
i'd go away from you
to realize that i'd die
away from you
t
t
if it could be that
i'd love you more
God will take you away from me
jealous and greedy
for what no one but you would get....
20 comments:
no more powerful tool than poetry and in your hands, you wield magic with it.
@ manu
ur comments mean everything :)
:)
cho chweet.
No, seriously, I'm usually not that big a fan of love poems, but this one has a very fresh innocence about it that's pleasantly surprising. It's uncomplicated, simple. Ergo, I likeie likeie
@ comin from u crumbs...this mean a whooping lot to me...thanks :)
if it could be
that i could write this
i would be you
for i won't be writing this
if i weren't you
spelling mistakes apart, a class apart...guess it was a moment's inspiration :-)
@ harishettan
i guess it was( a moments inspiration)...and u write far better than most ppl tht i've raed...let alone me :)
@ harishettan
spelling mistakes rectified :)
"everything happens for a reason"....the spelling mistakes had their reason too...and a very robust one at that....errors they might be but they also are eloquent proofs of some-special-thing!!! :-)
blessed is the one who inspired you to write this one...
@ harishettan
am not really sure wat u meant by tht :-|
@ neermathlam....
i guess am more blessed...to hve someone s spl in my life so that i could take up writing again :)
thanks for ur comment again :)
passion's pen pursues slippery slopes...and presumably u were passionate when u wrote it!!!!
woh toh keyboard ki kusoor thode hi thae...kuch nishaaniyaan saaf nazar aa rahe thae!!!!
hehe!!!
hope u had the measure of the meaning :-)
@ harishettan
ab jaake sab pata chala....:)
good one .... direct dil se !
@ deepa
thanks a lot :)
again!!! beautiful! esp de faith datz oozin out in de last stanza! de faith n belief in onez love!!!! truly amazing!!!!!
@ sashu
thnks again 4 u comment...
isn it faith tht drives us along? faith in one's self? and faith in ones love and in another more thn urself???
one of the most beloved and filling poems on love that I have ever had the good fortune to read!
Indeed you are blessed:) And may it ever be so:)
P.S. If I may, lol, say this: thank you for dropping by at the blog with your review.
@ usha
thanks a lot for returning the favour :)
and glad u liked it :)
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