Come, may I, to you,
in dreams of yours.
Feel, may I, the whispers,
you breathe soft.
Call, may I, to the
heartbeats tuned up.
Rise, may I, for the
beauty, yours divine.
Live, may I, alone
in your mind.
See, may I, the
wonder what you are.
Love, may I, the
you, I yearn.
in dreams of yours.
Feel, may I, the whispers,
you breathe soft.
Call, may I, to the
heartbeats tuned up.
Rise, may I, for the
beauty, yours divine.
Live, may I, alone
in your mind.
See, may I, the
wonder what you are.
Love, may I, the
you, I yearn.
20 comments:
do you need someone's permission for the afore mentioned things in the poem.?
being cognizant abt the state of affairs...cannot but say hehe!!!!
may u be on longing's lane again...one is never lame there :-)
Comment, may I, here,
On this beautiful poem of yours!
@ manu
well...not necessarily....but it never is wrong to seek is it?
:D
@ harishettan
longings of the heart never ease do they?
@ jagadeesh
nice to c u back here...thnks a lot for ur comment...do keep comin in :)
(grinning)
nor if u dont seek too na.?
nice! good flow n rhythm!!!! :)
@manu...
have ur own way :P
@ sashu
tahnks :)
have found my way, thanks..!
@ manu..
forever welcome
er.....
what greener pastures are you looking for exactly? Thought we had enough of green AND pastures around of late :D :D
@crumbs....
aha so i c u've commented ;) :P
sort of a tagorean mysticism, if i read into the poem, (may i, :P)the "you" suddenly gains in gravity, and so does the poem, generally. it's a tender love poem otherwise - making one wanting to feel tended by love in its most mythical sort.
@ arunchettan...
thank u for peeppin in again :)
This one touches places..:) tenderly too..
Beautifully done.
I especially fell for the last two lines. Creative construction there:)
A wonderful carving, Vrinda:)
@usha
thanks a lot :)
Beautiful poem :)
@abhinav
glad u think so :)
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