There's something I felt,
Silent and warm within.
A feeling so divine, yet undefined.
My simple mind, fathom, it couldn't.
Blowing, ruffling my nerves, it kept.
Scary it was, for what it wasn't.
Beyond the grips, could I know,
Why me, it was?
Chose I, to ask not.
I do not know why.
Skimmed through the unknown,
Undefined realms again.
Futile it was, to know,
Silent and warm within.
A feeling so divine, yet undefined.
My simple mind, fathom, it couldn't.
Blowing, ruffling my nerves, it kept.
Scary it was, for what it wasn't.
Beyond the grips, could I know,
Why me, it was?
Chose I, to ask not.
I do not know why.
Skimmed through the unknown,
Undefined realms again.
Futile it was, to know,
Happy and content though.
16 comments:
what if u cant call it by a name....
so nice to see u back..:-)
happy and content in not asking what the undefinite divinity was? there are so many poles in the poem potentially clashing with each other: silence/ruffle; divine/scary; beyond grip/skim; why/chose not to; skim/unknown; futile/content. it is a tough task to balance the weights on each sides so as not to slip away. the poem in its unassuming innocence accomplishes it quite easily. kudos :)
@ suji
it feels grt to be back sujichetta..after days which seemed like centuries of not writing or not being able to write anything, this is a very plesant break...
:)
@ arun chettan
it really is amazing tht u can draw you responses like this...am now asking myself tht did i write the poem keepin allt hsi in mind??seriouslyam still thinkin..:)
:)
dont think.
write another.
ayyo philosophical aayo!!!!! :O ....venda,venda onnum pidi kittilla!!!...pakshe ezhuthiya aalkkum kaaryamaayittonnum manasilaayillello...aashwaasam :P
let me call it a poetic parade of philosophic posers...and if it's the abounding expression of an actual experience i will call u lucky :-)
@ arunchettan
hee hee...aye aye captain :D
@harishettan...
i cannot write but abt experiences :)
in the end, I suppose only the last line matters :)
Love this one
@crumbs
yup i gues thts all tht ultimately matters :)
beautiful!
@matangi
long time i've seen u here...welcome back :)
and thanks a lot for your comment
Bravo. Well crafted.
keep it rollin;)
no comments. what do you think about the poem.?
@scribbler
thank u :)
@manu
*amused*
wat kind of a question is thta?
i love evry thing i write...coz its a part of me...n this is no diff..its a diff matter if ppl like it or not
Post a Comment