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Friday, November 7, 2008

wishing

I go to sleep everyday hoping I'd be woken up by your knocking on the door. I wake up everyday and open the door, hoping you'd be there, waiting for me to come out. I keep my room neat everyday, so that when you come, you would want to stay and never leave. I put kajal everyday, hoping you'd be there beside me, whispering how much you like my kohil lined eyes. I wait for you to get a holiday, hoping you'd come down to see me. I cry to you that I miss you, hoping one day, you surely will come to kiss my tears away. I wish everyday would be my birthday, so that you'll have a reason to surprise me by coming to me. I drape my bed with blue bedsheets, knowing that you love blue, and hoping one day, you'd wake up with me on them. i ask you come to me, you find different answers all the time...



I tell you that I miss you....don't you miss me too?

11 comments:

Usha Pisharody said...

Touching! And very appealing at different levels, be it that of a young child, or even a woman in love!

The Mind Bedouin said...

dear vrinda...
i love the idea..i love the blue bedsheet bit(successful alliteration construction**grin of glee**..!!!) :)) .. i love the last line...
but some bits seem slightly cliched.. you could have slightly revised n edited some other bits as well.... but i cant say much abt it cos i think i completely understand what exactly u r sayin ... n why u r sayin it... so yay to u!!

vrinda said...

@ usha

:)

vrinda said...

@ TMB

if i'd stayed to edit and polish this, you mite not have seen this on my blog :)

The Mind Bedouin said...

hee hee... gotcha!!!tc...

suji said...

loved it vrinde..:-)

Sandeep Balan said...

i really liked your last post which had a similar tone..."Rain clouds"...ditto here...when i try writing philosophical stuff or penning an essay, i also use this tone often....really endearing....

vrinda said...

@ suji

somehow, i knew u wud *smiles*

vrinda said...

@ sandeep

thank you. will soon be visiting ur blog. havent found the time as yet...

sonal said...

as usual.. i see a bit of myself in ur writing. *sighs*

crumbs said...

AAhem!!
I don't think I should be saying what I want to be heard saying :D