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Monday, January 12, 2009

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There’s pleasure in waiting
It’s like licking an ice cream cone
Bottoms first.

14 comments:

Sonal said...

intrigued by the exclamation mark. explain please!!..

vrinda said...

@ sonal

two reasons mainly:
1) i astounded myself by coming up with this poem.coz i hadnt even sat down to write. it happened so suddenly after i'd kept down the phone after a conversation

2) i dint know, still dont know how to title it. so the "!" stayed.

Sonal said...

he he he!
it wasn't a question asked in a demanding tone. relax my friend.
and knowing ur reasons, i think it's well titled.
write more please!

Usha Pisharody said...

!
I love the comparison.

All the more reason for that intriguing title :)

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:)

deja_vu said...

I love ice cream.. some cones do have have a chocolate bottom *grin*

vrinda said...

@ usha
thank you for the comment..and many thanks for the awards :)
feels great :)

vrinda said...

@yadu

i did think of the cones with chocolate bottoms..in those cases..

"There’s pleasure in waiting
It’s like licking an chocolate tipped ice cream cones
first things first."

else

There’s pleasure in waiting
It’s like licking an ice cream cone
Bottoms first.

*impish*

The Mind Bedouin said...

loved it... dunno what else to say... but i feel you could have said 'bottom' instead of 'bottoms'.. :)

vrinda said...

@the mind bedouin

will keep that in mind :)

Zeinab said...

How do you do it...(lick the ice cream in a cone? lick the bottom of the cone by turning it upside down? by reaching under it with a lowered tongue?) Somehow this doesn't sit well with me, because, i guess, I don't like ice cream much less on a cone.

vrinda said...

@Zeinab

i meant licking the cone first, before the ice cream...as in go from the outside part of the cone -licking the wafer that is, and then to the ice-cream--the finale

deja_vu said...

*giggle*

im glad you didn't use an else statement in the main post :P

MAN IN PAINTING said...

that is poem.
loved the title too.
it was explanatory
wishes..