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Wednesday, February 20, 2008

May I.....?

Come, may I, to you,
in dreams of yours.
Feel, may I, the whispers,
you breathe soft.
Call, may I, to the
heartbeats tuned up.
Rise, may I, for the
beauty, yours divine.
Live, may I, alone
in your mind.
See, may I, the
wonder what you are.
Love, may I, the
you, I yearn.

20 comments:

manu said...

do you need someone's permission for the afore mentioned things in the poem.?

hari(sh) said...

being cognizant abt the state of affairs...cannot but say hehe!!!!

may u be on longing's lane again...one is never lame there :-)

jagadeesh said...

Comment, may I, here,
On this beautiful poem of yours!

vrinda said...

@ manu
well...not necessarily....but it never is wrong to seek is it?
:D

vrinda said...

@ harishettan

longings of the heart never ease do they?

vrinda said...

@ jagadeesh

nice to c u back here...thnks a lot for ur comment...do keep comin in :)

manu said...

(grinning)
nor if u dont seek too na.?

Sashu said...

nice! good flow n rhythm!!!! :)

vrinda said...

@manu...

have ur own way :P

vrinda said...

@ sashu

tahnks :)

manu said...

have found my way, thanks..!

vrinda said...

@ manu..

forever welcome

crumbs said...

er.....
what greener pastures are you looking for exactly? Thought we had enough of green AND pastures around of late :D :D

vrinda said...

@crumbs....

aha so i c u've commented ;) :P

ARUN said...

sort of a tagorean mysticism, if i read into the poem, (may i, :P)the "you" suddenly gains in gravity, and so does the poem, generally. it's a tender love poem otherwise - making one wanting to feel tended by love in its most mythical sort.

vrinda said...

@ arunchettan...

thank u for peeppin in again :)

Usha :) said...

This one touches places..:) tenderly too..
Beautifully done.

I especially fell for the last two lines. Creative construction there:)

A wonderful carving, Vrinda:)

vrinda said...

@usha

thanks a lot :)

Abhinav Viswambharan said...

Beautiful poem :)

vrinda said...

@abhinav

glad u think so :)